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December 23, 2012
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We had dreams
in places we never knew
they could get stuck but
we rolled and played just the same.
Tomorrow could be for thoughts,
that night the sea and sky were all that mattered.

Apologetic imprecision mocks
the unknown movements in this new dance
and our awkward bodies strove to find hold amongst
sand sinking in like some borrowed waterbed
with objections, or a desire to join in our timeless frolic.

My smile lapsed with the sudden seriousness
of breaths with meaning-- of questioning eyes.
But her eyes told only of sand soaked dreams
of that moment lost in places where time fails
and eternity stands on the end of a thumbnail.

Ravished, we grasped at a hunger
we had not known and with such grace,
her hand found my face to acquiesce.
No sense could be made at that late hour,
in those throes; under that moon.

But it is too cold now for dreams.
This celebratory time pulls distance from a hat--
Leaves but one loan star,
to shiver in a vast sky uncertain.
Time counts forward to the ending of the year
with hopes of a better one to begin.
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*BeyondJen Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh gosh, this is beautiful. That third stanza is especially lovely, but the whole piece really pulls you in and stirs a known feeling. :heart:
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:iconbslisted:
This one makes me blush. It is completely autobiographical and the person being referred to is real and has read this piece...yup blush again :-/ It's the first happy piece I've written in a while and probably the only good one at that. I'm glad you liked it...it kinda makes me high :)
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*BeyondJen Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well I hope the person that read it adored it. It's really a joy to read.

I like these happy pieces from you. Write more, okay? :heart:
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:iconbslisted:
not likely to write more happy as that was short-lived...in fact, I think i'm putting the pen down all together. {broken} </3
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:iconbslisted:
consider this edited :)
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*BeyondJen Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh no. :( :huggle:
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`FuzzyHoser Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lovely stuff, Brian. The second and third sections are especially nice. :heart:
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:iconbslisted:
thanks so much, Rachel :)
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`FuzzyHoser Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
A pleasure, Brian. :)
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:iconxtcgm:
Not much to say but when has that ever stopped me:

. . .eternity stands on the end of a thumbnail. . . (Good one!)

Lose the comma in the last line of stanza 1

Sorry, just a flying visit!

Blessed be in the New Year.
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